Pitch feedback

A well executed pitch showing some planning and development of ideas. There are still some gaps which hopefully the pitch will help to clarify.  You are working at lower end of level 3 at present.

remember to address the audience and avoid turning your back and looking at the screen.  The original video was shown which helped the audience connect with your ideas.  Your slides allowed you to explain ideas and raise issues. Use these as prompts rather than redaing them verbatim. 
the storyboard of six scenes is fine for this stage in the process but needs to be expanded when planning becomes clearer.  It is an essential part of the process and must be documented.

I like the ideas of a performance around nature, maybe this would be the idea for branding the artist.  
You consider issues surrounding representation and keep reflecting upon this.
The Beyonce video is quite experimanetal and abstract, what will you take from the original video?

• Engage with the evaluation questions. this will help later when you answer them.
• How will you brand the artist
• Outline your drafts and ideas for print artefacts
• Put the presentation on the blog
• Develop ideas for a narrative

The song is quite slow so how will this affect the style and pace of editing?
What lighting have you considered?
How will you put a 'positive perspective' that you discussed on the song?
What permission will you need for shooting on location?